If this was for an assignment then you deserve your good grade. I really like the humor in this especially the end.
This short has great animation, especially if this is your first try. If you feel like making something longer - I would say go for it.
While the laws may be funny, the frames move too fast for most people to read them, you should simply have a next button instead of making text a movie. Also, the file size is 6mb for a list of text, the music is not important enough to require such a large increase in size. Remember that not everyone has a fast internet connection, it could take someone with dial up quite a long time to load this.
Thanks for the review. Yeah I understand. I released my improved version of this flash and re-submitting it. Oh yeah and I no longer use that song anyway. I just use a less than 1MB music file from the audio portal. The link is here (http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/vie w/463625). Hope you view it and give your honest comment and vote.
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